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July 24, 2021


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Who’s that girl finale

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WHO’S THAT GIRL? … (18+) …

Part 19


The queen stopped on her track as she was about to blast Nora with her trident, she looked more closely as students came closer to the beach and then all stopped seeing the sirens fight..

It was really an awkward moment

“omy goodness, Lynn was right Nora isn’t human ” a girl said.

“I didn’t know all this creatures still exits I thought they were extinct, and I thought they only exits like in the 1980’s ” a boy added..


Freddie turned and was surprised to see his whole class mates, he stood still not knowing what to do, just then the queen jumped into the water, she signaled the girls to join her and they all did except Nija who stood beside Nora, and they both looked damn identical with their red her glowing in the sun,..

Chad took courage and walked closer to Freddie and asked

“are you okay”

“I think so.. But I’ll be fully okay when that good for nothing woman is dead what are you guys doing here ” Freddie asked..

“Lynn told everyone in class who Nora is ” Chad replied

“oh my.. Lynn..? ” Freddie yanked

“yeah! ” Chad said and Freddie gave Lynn a glare who was totally feeling guilty about it..


“thanks for having my back out there Nija I didn’t know you could do that for me” Nora said to her sister..

“trust me am on your side mother has gone to far she doesn’t even seem like our mother again and what else could I do you’re my sister and best friend ” Nija said and the two sisters hugged.. While everyone watched..

“c’Mon we have to go stop mom” Nija said and Nora nodded, and then looked at Freddie

“let’s go ” Nora said to Freddie

“good luck buddy” Chad said and Freddie smiled..


The two girls were about to get in the water when Freddie stopped them, “I can’t go in the water Nora I’ll die I can’t breathe underwater ” Freddie said..

“yes you can you’re bonded with her ” Nija said and Freddie nodded And immediately they all dived in the water, Freddie was astonished seeing Nija and Nora looking very very beautiful under the water and how a tail appeared before their legs and how their skin glowed and how their hair changed into colours too., all those things was happening to him too but his legs never left..

After minutes of swiftly swimming, they all came across their siren home which looks more of a shrine to Freddie, he gasped by the glowing of it.

As three of them swam in, the queen and the Two other sisters stood behind their mother and Lian still tied..

“I thought you wouldn’t come cause I was about to kill the old witch” the queen said and Nora started to boil in anger..

“and you Nija you’re just like your stupid sister I can’t believe you betrayed me, you betrayed us all no wonder you two look so much alike birds of the same feathers I could have killed you both when I gave birth to you ” the queen added and Nija rolled her eyes.

“just shut it mother ” Nora said angrily and the queen gasped..

The queen became extremely angry and blasted Nora with her trident directly at her act causing great pain for her and Freddie the two of them fell helplessly on the floor while Nija tries to help, but Nika and Nina quickly faced her.. “now let’s see what you fools can do.. Nora honey get up and face me or are you too tired ” the queen said and laughed hysterically..

Lian the old witch, couldn’t held her breath much longer and all of a sudden her eyes closed and that was the end of her..

“no.. ” Nora cried bitterly,

“finally that rotten had is finally dead ” the queen said smiling devilishly.

“how could you do this mother how could you!” Nora yelled with anger and hatred in her voice..

“because I wanted to, now it’s your turn ” the queen said and laughed..


“Freddie hold my hand ” Nora ordered she and Freddie tried to catch their breaths because the pain was becoming worse and they’re getting weaker.

Freddie did as instructed, he held Nora hands tightly while her mother watched and waited when to blast Nora again.. Nika and Nina held Nija tight so she wouldn’t escape.. .

Nora started some incantations, of a witch whispering it to her self her eyes were turning all round black and so was her hair and was also happening to Freddie he could feel the power flowing in him the strength and also the hatred.. Nora continued her spell, she was combining her with and siren spell together. .

Mighty wind’s started to blow like tornados, everywhere started becoming dark that none of them could see except Nora and Freddie..


Back at the surface, everyone saw how the water started bringing heavy waves all of them stood still and watch wondering What was going on in there..


As Nora took control of the darkness that hindered, she released her hands from Freddie’s and ordered him to take the trident from her mother, though her mind and slowly Freddie walked up to the queen who was wasn’t seeing anything at all and then grabbed a hold of the trident.. The queen gasped when the trident suddenly skipped from her hand but she couldn’t see to know who took it..

“so what are you going to do now mother ” Nora said as every where became bright again.

Freddie handed her the trident and she breathes in feeling the power of the trident..

The queen was speechless she know she was powerless without it, now even her normal powers can’t stop Nora now.

Before anyone could talk or even blink Nora blasted her mother without wasting time but the queen stood up again..

But Nora had no choice than to blast her over and over again.. Nina suddenly sneaked behind nora and pushed making her to throw the trident and Immediately the queen got a hold of it again…


“hahaha foolish girl ” the queen said and Nora turned to Nora and used her eyes to control Nina choking her to death.. Immediately..

“what have you done ” the queen yelled and immediately used the trident on Nora again and this time she wasn’t her self it hited her so hard that she could die any moment and could Freddie, the queen moved closer to Nina and tries to bring her back to life..

Nora closed her eyes slowly her breathing fading little by little..

“Freddie you gave to end this and safe your self ” Nora said through their minds..

“but how am too weak to do anything ” Freddie replied…

“swim closer to my mother’s chair under it you’ll see a huge glowing pearl.. Take it and destroy it and all this will be over ” nora said and Freddie breathed a little and swam his way to the chair he gathered all the strength he could get.. The queen didn’t notice because she was still busy with Nina..


When Freddi got to the chair he quickly grabbed the pearl which seems very heavy and he stood up ready to smash it on the floor..

“mother look” Nika panicked and the queen turned and saw Freddie and she gasped…

“what have you done, don’t you dare touch that thing” the queen said breathing heavily and sacredly

“I’m touching.. it.. and I’m going.. to break.. I.. It” Freddie replied..

“don’t do it Freddie if you do we are all going to die, that will be the end of us sirens, that pearl is our life ” Nija warned while Freddie became confused..

“don’t listen to them Fred just do it” Nora said already crying and lying hopelessly on the floor..

“what! But if I do you’ll die and I too” Freddie said to Nora while Nija nodded in agreement..

“put that down now ” the queen yelled..

“I don’t care if we all die,.. We’re all bad.. So we deserve death so I’m begging you Freddie so it ” Nora cried..

“but I’m gonna die too” Freddie panicked..

“no you’re not ” Nora said..

“yes you are” the queen said trying to persuade Freddie..

But Freddie was still confused not knowing what to do, he has just started to love Nora and she’s going to die, he’s going to kill her, he began to shed tears and, as he weekly held the pearl..

The queen raised her trident ready to use it on Freddie..

“Freddie do it now.. ” Nora yelled and with anger hatred shock and sadness Freddie let go of the pearl and it fell to the ground and shatterred to pieces.. And suddenly the glowness of the pearl died..

“no.. ……..” the queen cried but it was too late she started to feel weak.. And suddenly she fell to the ground and so did the other sirens and all of them immediately turned to mist before vanishing..

Freddie quickly ran to Nora cause he knows she’ll be gone soon..

“Nora.. I’m so sorry ” he said and started to cry.. He knelt before her and placed her head on his thigh her tail has started to become translucent..

“no it’s okay it… it was what I wanted ” she said weakly and tried to smile..

“but how come you’re not dead yet” Freddie asked feeling as weak also..

“because I’m. Bonded with you and you’re human ” Nora replied..

“you know I’ve never told you how beautiful you look ” Freddie said and Nora couldn’t help it but shed tears..

“I love you Freddie I’ve always do” she said and freddie held himself from crying..

Her body started to become translucent like her tail and she sighed. And said..

“if I disappear you will too, so go out there Freddie you have family and friends, so kiss me it I’ll help” Nora said and slowly Freddie kissed her..

Immediately he disengaged from the kiss, he felt empty.

“you’re free we are bonded free, and you have thirty seconds to leave the ocean or else you’ll run out of oxygen.. I’ll be back Freddie I promise even if it’s the next world and I’ll always love you” she said and immediately vanished.

Freddie felt a lump in his throat he wanted to cry but he didn’t want to cry he didn’t know what type of emotion he was feeling..


Lynn, Chad and the rest of the students chat amongst themselves because Chad told them all what had happened why Freddie had to fight and and all that and they all yanked at Lynn for being so stupid.. And they all had no choice than to have sympathy for Freddie and Nora…

“oh my goodness it’s Freddie ” Avril yelled and immediately they all moved closer and saw Freddie coming out of the water.. Looking tired and weak..

When he got to them his uniform was all soaked up and his hair wet and normal not coloury.

Chad immediately ran to him and so did others.

“are you okay ” Chad asked.

“what happened down there ” another person asked.

“where’s Nora ” Avril asked..

“she’s gone.. Like dead ” Freddie said bitterly and they all gasped.

“they all are” freddie added and stared to shed


“don’t worry Freddie everything’s going to be fine” a girl. Lauren said and Freddie looked at her In a way Chad understood and he whispers to him that he told them everything..

“I didn’t even have to tell her I love her ” Freddie said bitterly and Chad hugged him

“it’s alright bro” he Said and patted.. Freddie’s back.

“Freddie I just wanted to tell you I’m sorry for everything ” Lynn said sadly, while Freddie said..

“it’s okay everything is back to normal now ”


Freddie went home that day he wasn’t himself he failed to eat dinner and went to bed sadly..


Last part ✍️

Part 20🤩



Freddie and Chad has finally gotten admission and to college, in the same place actually, when Freddie had to leave his home his mother cried her eyes out before letting Freddie go..

Freddie got up tiredly from his bed, and when he glanced at the time his eyes grew wider, 8:30am

“ah geez I’m late” he said and looked over the bed opposite his and couldn’t find Chad that means be left he quickly dashed to the shower, he quickly wore his clothes and brushed his hair backwards before grabbing his backpack..,

Freddie walked very fast to class, he didn’t expect college life to be so tiring and complicated, on his way to class he quickly stopped at a coffee shop and bought a cup of cappuccino and a doughnut before becoming a little full and finally got to class,..

As he entered the class the professor had already started teaching, he groaned in anger and disappointment.. He looked at the front and spotted Chad but there was no empty seat beside him or anywhere everywhere was occupied, he had to sit at the back he spotted an empty chair at the back beside the window and also which was beside a girl with a curl short blond hair,.. He walked silently to the chair not wanting to make any sound at all, so not to drag attention, he finally got to chair and sat down and breathed a sigh of relief.. He unzipped his bag but his elbow mistakenly touches the blond girl beside ,

“I’m sorry ” he suddenly said and faced his bag again which seems hard to unzip.

“it’s okay ” the girl said and faces her book writing down what the professor wrote..

“and that’s the end of today’s lesson ” the professor announced and grabbed his lesson note and coffee before heading out..

“damn it ” Freddie said angrily and threw his backpack on the floor, Chad stood up from his seat and he and Freddie made eye contact and Chad started to pack his notes to catch up with Freddie..

“you know you should have made it here early if you wanted to learn but don’t worry I can borrow you my lesson note ” the girl next to Freddie said, staring at Freddie..


“no thank you I’ll tell my friend” he said and picked up his bag standing up, the girl stood up too with her books in her hand. Freddie turned to the girl and almost passed out when he saw Nora, she was completely Nora but except for the blue eyes and black long hair,..

“no… no…nor” he couldn’t even talk but trembling staring at her from head to toe she was more human-like her skin wasn’t glowing but she is beautiful and the dimples were still there but she was a bit taller.

“um are you okay ” the girl said wanting to laugh..

Chad walked up to them.

“hey bro” he said and tapped Freddie, Freddie looked at him and then looked at the girl and then Chad looked at the girl and arched an eyebrow.. “Nora? ” he called and couldn’t believe his eyes..

“actually it’s Jinora, Jinora Aphron” she said and smiled..

“wow I can’t believe it you came back ” Freddie said and hugged her, she looked at Freddie weirdly and said..

“I don’t know what you’re talking about, but you’re Freddie right” she asked while Freddie nodded..

“and you’re Chad ” she asked while Chad nodded, the boys looked at each other then looked at ‘Jinora’ ..

“how did you know us ” Chad asked

“I don’t know I felt like I do and also Freddie you’re the one who answers the question every day in class I’ve been watching you” she said and smiled and her dimples appeared..

“but I haven’t been seeing you in any of my classes ” Freddie said.

“I’ve always been in all classes but you just didn’t notice” she said and smiled ..

“okay then see you around” she said and smiled.. Grabbing her bag from the chair, Freddie didn’t want her to go, his heart started to beat, he just found Nora and she’s about to leave again.. As she started walking away he quickly ran up to her, and held her hand..

“Nora.. I mean.. Jinora can we um hang out together sometimes.. ” he said and stared at her in her light brown eyes..

She began to smile and said “sure, when? ”

“how about tomorrow “Freddie said and she nodded and said

“see you tomorrow then, Freddie Mercury ” Freddie felt like hugging her but he stood his ground and watch her go..

“I can’t believe it mehn she looks so much like Nora or is it that she came back for me ” Freddie Said to Freddie and they both walked back home , both were roommates.. After taking different classes again for the day, the day was finally over,


During nighttime Freddie and Chad laid on each of their bed staring at darkness but talking to each other before finally falling asleep..

Freddie had a dream.

In his dream he saw Nora smiling with her long black hair sweeping the floor she was wearing what jinora wore today, a plain yellow dress, but Nora was glowing and her eyes were sparkly blue..


“Nora ” Freddie called surprisingly

“Freddie” Nora called happily as her voice echoed..

“I came back for you Freddie, I am Jinora but she doesn’t know that but still she does ” Nora said and kissed Freddie before disappearing.. Freddie didn’t understand what she meant but he woke up on time the next day and so did Freddie’s and they both head to class together.


During afternoon Fredi met Jinora outside the campus and Jinora felt happy seeing him that she quickly kissed him, she backed away and gasped..

“OMG I’m sorry I just.. I don’t know I’m feeling like I’ve known you before, like we had a thing before ” she said and shyly smiled..

“we have, Jinora we did have a thing and guess what” Freddie said and cupped her cheek

“what? ” she said smiling..

“I love you” Freddie Said while Nora smiled even more..

“and guess what too” Jinora said

“what? ” Fredie said

“I love you too” Jinora said and they both kissed.


After everything Nora came back and they later got married, you see guys when there’s love there is Life


The End….

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