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July 24, 2021


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Who’s that girl batch 4

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WHO’S THAT GIRL? … (18+) …

Part 10


“but mom this necklace is very special to me ” Lynn said using her hand to cover her neck.. “where did you even get that it looks disgusting and trust me you don’t want me to take it off my self ” her mom threatened and she frowned and slowly removed it she went to her room and dropped it in her drawer and walked back downstairs..

“take.. Put this instead” her mom said handing her a golden necklace Lynn angrily took it from her mother and her mother gave her a glare , she put in on rolled her eyes. “okay we’re ready let’s hurry your dad and Horan are in the car” Lynn mom said and they both walked outside..


Freddie laid on his bed operating his phone he couldn’t sleep and he decided to play video games on his phone maybe he’ll fall asleep, wherelse Lynn laid on her bed exhausted from the party they went she changed into her pajamas and laid on her bed falling asleep and also forgetting to wear the numbania necklace..

Nora could be seen in her Dark but cozy room the moon light beamed through her window, she laid naked on her bed but was covered with a black blanket, her hair was red and her eyes were pure sky blue. She kept thinking about Freddie and his words “you don’t have a heart” the word ringed in her head.. your heart is made out of woods she sniffed the air occasionally thinking about all Freddie had said so it will prevent her from crying..

She closed her eyes and tries to get connected to Freddie through her mind and she did..

Freddie got tired of his boring video game and dropped his phone angrily beside him he closed his eyes but suddenly heard Nora’s voice.. Saying Freddie Can you hear me’

‘whoa what just happened ‘ Freddie said sitting upright in his bed and breathing heavily he looked around his room but no one was there he breathed a sigh of relief and laid back on his bed..again but was astonished hearing her voice again.. He wanted to jerk up but stayed quiet what the hell does she want he thought and Nora said * I want you to listen to me* freddie was surprised did she just hear my thought he thought.

yes Freddie I just did I’m communicating with you through my mind and so are you I’m sorry if you’re mad but please hear me out Nora said while Freddie breathed and focused more into the mind communicating thing..

okay what do you want to tell me Freddie set his mind to say that and Nora happily smiled on her bed.. Nora said something out which Freddie didn’t hear because she didn’t say it through her mind and immediately Freddie saw himself in an empty red room..

“where the hell am I? ” He asked no one In particular.. “Freddie” nora said behind him and he immediately turned, and saw Nora in a plain white dress and her hair long and red..

“where are we I was just in my bed seconds ago” Freddie said panicking

“I know. I made our mind communication more easier by bringing you in my mind. I get to that through the kiss I’m sorry once again ” Nora said and sighed ..”you’re a lot creepier than I thought.. Okay then go on and tell me what you wanted to tell me” Freddie yanked.

“okay.. Look about today am really sorry for the kiss. ”

“oh my god you’re still on to that kiss, am not mad about it” Freddie yelled and his voice echoed.

“you’re not? Then why are you so mad at me” nora cranked

“don’t you get it.. Chad.. I am mad because of Chad” freddie said and Nora smiled..

“what’s so funny” Freddi said angrily and sarcastically

“I can bring Chad back” Nora flinched


“you can? Don’t lie to me nora” Freddie said

“trust me I’m not” Nora said

“trust you! That’s the last thing I’ll do” Freddie said “then don’t, just count on it” Nora said nearly angry but wasn’t angry..

“so.. I think it’s past my bed time now I would like to be in bed now” Freddie recall while Nora smiled and said

“just close your eyes and think about your bed”..

“okay” Freddie said and did so and immediately he opened his eyes he was on his bed.. “whao” he breathed out and sighed heavily..


Nora opened her eyes on her bed and took her lovely blooded bottom lip between her teeth thinking about Freddie and the way he reacted while she said she can bring Chad back..

‘if bringing Chad back will make you happy then I’ll do so’ she said and sighed.. And her lovely hair turned red..



Everyone got ready for school including our beloved freddie ,he got to class that morning and sat down on his chair thinking about last night.. Just then her felt a slight touch on his shoulder and then he suddenly turned and jumped in astonishment .. “Chad!! ”

“hey.. Good morning to u too why are you yelling my name so much” chad said sarcastically while Freddie hugged him he has no idea of what has been going on..

“do you remember anything? ” Freddie asked.

“well I remember waking up this morning and eating breakfast and..

“don’t worry that’s enough ” Freddie said hugging Chad one more time , chad shrugged and hugged him back. Nora who has been watching by the door smiled seeing Freddie happy , as she was about to fully entered the class Lynn bumped into her, “what’s your damage Lynn” Nora said angrily

Lynn stood her balance and walked away, Nora rolled her eyes and walked up to her seat and sat down..

Lynn got close to Freddie. To greet him but Freddie passed her and walked up to Nora..

Nora stood up seeing him immediately and she smiled and said.. “good mor..

Freddie hugged her warmly and happily, “oh” Nora breathed out and smiled just what she needed a hug s sweet warm hug

“thank you so much” Freddie whispered in her ear and she smiled.. He disengaged the hug and she asked “have you forgiven me” ..

“of course I have buy how did you do it. ” Freddie asked.

“a true magician never reveal his secret” Nora said nervously and laughed.. “whatever but thanks any way, ” Freddie said and walked up to Chad.

Nora sat down on her seat smiling she couldn’t believe it Freddie forgives me’ she thought.

She placed her hand on her chest and felt her heartbeat ‘why is my heart’ beating so fast she thought and close her eyes. Then opened them right back up to glance at happy Freddie. Nora could feel something change in her but didn’t know when her hair suddenly Turned purple..

“dude.. Her hair just changed” Chad said to Freddie and Lynn and Freddie turned to look at Nora who just noticed it..

“what the? ” Nora said standing up “what’s happening to me ” she said without smiling..


Part 11


nora didn’t understand why her hair turned purple, her hair always shows her emotions and she didn’t understand what purple is, but red means anxious angry and sad, but purple, what the hell does purple means she thought and touched It.. Freddie moved closer to her but not too close, “stay away Freddie I don’t know what’s happening to me” Nora panicked..

“what are you why would your hair suddenly change” Chad said to Nora behind Freddie . Freddie turned to Chad and gave him a look to calm down.

‘she helped me and I think I can try helping her on this’ Freddie thought and Lynn couldn’t hold on the anger burning in her anymore and immediately she walked out of the class..

“okay Nora look we’re not the only ones in class they’re three more people In class so please don’t drag their attention here” Freddie said calmly while Nora nodded, Nora sat down slowly on Her seat and breathed slowly in and out. Freddie squat beside her desk and said “okay can you tell me what’s wrong and why’s your hair purple ”

“I dont know.. Actually my hair’s always red when am anxious angry and sad while black is only to keep me calm and happy, but purple I haven’t experienced that before and I noticed my eyes are more bluer than before, It feels awkward telling you this but I just felt like to do so” nora said and sighed..

“maybe you have a new change or emotion or something I don’t know but thank you for bringing Chad back.. ” Freddie said and stood up smiling at Nora and immediately her hair turned black.

“your hair is black again” Freddie whispered to her and she glanced at it and sighed, Freddie sat on his seat and explained to Chad who Nora is and he should keep it a secret.. And Chad agreed abundantly..

During class that morning Nora mind wasn’t at rest something kept bothering her, her instincts kept telling her something big is coming But she couldn’t understand or have a clue of what it is.. And she became worried but tried her best to keep her hair not from changing..


Everyone trooped out from the class and to the cafeteria, chad and Freddie happily walked to the cafeteria and nora couldn’t help but smile as they play, immediately they left lynn Walked up to Nora angrily and more seriously hates her presence.

“what do you want ” Nora said with her teeth closed .

“you think you can fool me right, I know Freddie would think you’re good again but I know you’re still up to something ” Lynn said while Nora rolled her eyes and then scanned Lynn’s neck but couldn’t find the numbania necklace, she smiled devilishly within her and said “look Lynn you’re being to nosy why don’t you mind your business or else”

“or else what” Lynn cut her off

“or else I’ll do this” Nora said and immediately Lynn stopped breathing .. She gasped for air but couldn’t breathe , “so are you going to keep talking or what” Nora said smiling beautifully

Lynn eyes turned red due to the fact she cant breathe and all of a sudden she gasped for air and breathe.

“what.. Did you just do to me” Lynn said catching her breath.

“you didn’t stop talking so I had to shut you up” Nora said while Lynn got angry and immediately held Nora’s neck and said “I’m going to kill you” Nora gasped and said “Let go of me”..


“am not letting you go, you witch ” Lynn said while Nora huffed “you asked for it” Nora threatned and immediately Lynn let go of her neck and started to cough out blood, they were the only ones in class so Nora really took it In her, her suddenly became red controlling Lynn cough out blood and.

“Nora stop! ” Freddie yelled from the class with Chad behind him watching, Nora eyes turned to her normal blue-grey eyes and Lynn stopped coughing.. Freddie ran to them and helped Lynn up who was bending down before .. “have you lost your fucking mind you could have killed her” Freddie yanked

“I didn’t lost my mind, she started it” Nora said giving Lynn a glare, “I was on my own and all of a sudden she used her witchy power to make me cough out blood” Lynn lied while Nora gasped.

“I can’t believe you, ” Freddie said to Nora and took Lynn to her seat who hasn’t gain her balance.

“where’s my necklace I gave you”Freddie asked while Lynn said slowly “I’m sorry I forget it at home. ”

“it was for you to be protected, why’d u have to take it off” Freddie said while Lynn pouted but Freddie just shook it off and sighed..

Nora sat down feeling extremely angry at Freddie for not believing her but she just couldn’t blame it on Freddie, ‘just wait there Lynn am going to destroy you’ she said under her breath but chad heard it and moved away from her staring at her weirdly..


Nora suddenly sat still not moving, not talking and not breathing her beautiful lips became more red and her eyes suddenly turned blue_green Chad moved back again looking at the strange and weirs things happening to Nora, “you okay” he asked but Nora didn’t reply.

“dude I think something’s up with this girl” Chad said to Freddie and he immediately came to where Chad stood and they watched Nora.


Nora was making a very threatening mind communication with her mother and she had to go still

Nora: what do you want now mother.

Queen: don’t you dare call me mother you threw all we’ve walked for away but you know what, I can finally take that good for nothing human you failed to bring, Freddie Mercury thanks to your sister nina

Nora: you all should leave him alone

Queen: oh sweetie I don’t know what’s blinding you but you’re missing the opportunity of a life time think like one of us.. Be like us and act like us

Nora: no mother I am more powerful than all of you, you know that so stay away from me and Freddie and everyone else around him

Queen: are you threatening me?

Nora: yes I am

Queen: I don’t know what has been happening to you since you started staying with that old witch but I assure you I’ll deal with her and Freddie mark my words..

Nora:you’re going to far mother

Queen: and you’re being too good, Nora humans are our enemies we don’t need them in our life arent you happy of what you are

Nora: I was happy of what I am until now I’ve come to love humans and I think I’d love to be one of them

Queen: (Gasped) you’re, our of your mind… I don’t like all these rubbish you are telling me but trust me Freddie Mercury is going down, sun down

Nora: mother please, dont let me hurt you because of him

Queen: hahaha hurt me? I gave birth to you and trust me the numbania necklace won’t protect him this time..


Nora suddenly jerked back to life making freddie and Chad startled.

“is she okay” Chad whisphered to Freddie…

“are you okay” Freddie asked Nora who’s eyes started to turn sky blue with tears running down..

“no.. Freddie she’s coming for you”…


Part 12


“coming for me, who the hell is coming for me” Freddie said he could feel his heart beating

“my mother.. ” Nora said and gazed up at Freddie

“your mom! What the hell does she wants with me do I look like one of you” freddie said sarcastically while Nora stood up and moved closer to him but he moved back..

“look Freddie this is no laughing matter, can I talk to you alone ” nora said and looked at Chad behind Freddie and Freddie nodded and walked away leaving both of them Alone ..

Nora took another step towards Nora but this time Freddie stood still not moving, Nora sighed before taking..

“look days ago I was asked to bring two male spirits in the siren realm for excess power of a life time. I got Chad and my first victim And you were supposed to be the second one but

I let you go I didn’t know why i did so, my mother

became furious and once your name is printed you can never get changed she hasn’t figured it out that I had set Chad free but she’s on to you now.. And am sorry the numbania necklace can’t protect you this time”

“what!! how..wh…how..did I get..how did all this happen how can you get me In so much trouble… ” Freddie panicked with his eyebrow all arched up

“am sorry ” nora said staring at Freddie sympathetically with her glorious eyes..

Freddie sighed bitterly. .”so after they’ve get me they’ll come back to Chad? ” Freddie said while Nora nodded.. The sadness in freddie’s eyes made her more sad and disappointed in her mother, how

could she do such a thing.

Nora stood in front of freddie thinking both just stood there without moving or doing anything they both didn’t know what to say. Nora bit her lips lost in thoughts

why is mother so heartless

** why am I being so soft

**still is grandma right about me loving Freddie

** should I save Freddie

** of course but what about Chad

** ive got to stop mother no matter what


“so can you help me or think of anything ” freddie said to Nora looking deep in her beautiful eyes

“well there is a way. But it’s. It’s

“it’s what ”

Freddie persuaded

“it’s stupid and am not sure if you’ll really want to do it.. “Nora said and sighed

“well tell me what it is ” Freddie said while Nora gave him a look and sighed

she wanted to say something but couldn’t she sighed and say I have to go I’ll be back” and she left

Freddie watched her go he felt a bit awkward he’s like is at stake here and it’s really freaking him out, as much as he has tell Nora to kill him he still loves himself,

he sighed heavily and sat down

*what the fuck am I going to do

He thought as he wiped his face with his hand.

Chad walked up to him and sat beside him

“so i see you guys are done talking what did you talk about” Chad said

“well it’s not good news or great news either, I don’t know exactly why she got us in this fucking mess ” Freddie gagged while Chad arched an eyebrow and said.

“us! What do you mean us, ”

“look Chad dont freak out and listen carefully while I tell you what fucking happened to you, and why I hugged you so tight the day u came to school ” Freddie said chad breathed q sigh of anxiousness

“okay am all ears” Chad said ams Freddie began…


Nora appeared in her room and stormed to the next room which was Lian’s room the old witch who takes care of her.

“Nora what’s wrong ” Lian said immediately Nora stormed into her room.

“granny am freaking out.. Am going crazy” Nora said pacing out beside the door..

“tell me, what’s wrong? Sweetie ” Lian said and she breathes and said

“mother’s coming, she’s coming to take Freddie away, gran am scared like hell, I don’t know I just have this feeling of Freddie not going away ” Nora said sadly with her eyes getting blue.ish

“honey remember what I said last time, you love him that’s why” Lian said

“look gran I don’t know what the hell love is” Nora said breathlessly


“well love is a deep and warm feeling you have towards something or someoneľ

“so you mean I have a warm feeling towards Freddie?”

“of course you do, it’s your first time , that’s why you want to protect him badly”

“yes gran, I don’t care if I ‘love’ Freddie or not I want to protect him mother’s going to far” Nora panicked

“I’ve never liked your mother from the start, so honey am in with you and I know you’re thinking of what am thinking right? ” Lian said

“about the ‘bonding’ ” nora said while Lian nodded.

“I don’t know if freddie would agree it’s just an outstanding thing to do ” Nora said and her hair turned red

“stop worrying, it’s not an outstanding thing to do ” Lian yelled

“it is, and am not worried” Nora yelled back.

“your hair is red and you’re telling me you’re not worried ” Lian said,

Nora sighed and said almost in a whisper

“don’t you get it gran, I will have to have sex with him”

“and so.. Look nora it’s the only way just do it” Lian said and Nora helplessly sat down ,” I don’t know if Freddie would agree am hopeless gran ” Nora said

“look who cares if he agrees, If he doesn’t then he’s a goner ”

“goner! But I love him ” Nora yelled and then gasped

i can’t believe I just said that .

She thought and Lian tried to hide her smile..

“look nora just go back to school and know for sure if he’ll agree ” Lian said and Nora nodded before disappearing


“what the fuck” Chad yelled but Freddie shunned him..

“I cant calm down dude you’ll be dead by midnight who knows.. ” Chad said while Freddie heart skipped and he sighed.

” Nora has a way I can get through this but she doesn’t want to tell me ” Freddie said

“whatever it is you have to agree to it” Chad said and Freddie nodded.

Then in slow motion Nora walked in looking beautiful as always,

chad almost lost his patience as he saw her.

“fred we have to talk ” Nora said is she got close to them

“exactly, talk that’s all I wanted” Freddie yanked and Nora gave Chad a look that says


“am going nowhere ” Chad yanked

“I told him everything ” Freddie said and Nora sighed

“well like i said there is a way to stop my mother” Nora said and freddie nodded

“go on” freddie persuaded

“well we have to.. well we have to make a bond between us” nora said and moved her gaze to the floor.

“a bond!! What the hell, are you like going to do some blood covenant or something” Chad Said while Nora shook her head negatively and said..

“no.. It’s through sex”

“what!!” Freddie and Chad said together ..

“Freddie am so sorry, but what do you think” nora said looking at Freddie who looks like he’s going to pass out any seconds



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