Rude Mr popular (I fell for him)

Episode 4




I got back from school on Friday afternoon ..

“Hi mom. I greeted

I went towards her and kissed her

” why are you sweating like this?, did you run?”. She asked

I nodded

“Why?”. She asked raising an eyebrow

” I am going out with Tina”. I replied

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“Liar”. Bella yelled

My mum stared at her

” she wants the go see Shayne”. She explained

” who is Shayne?”. My mum asked obviously confused

“What! we both chorused

” you mean you don’t know Shayne Adams”. I said with my eyes wide opened..

” oh, Shayne Adam, the cute singer”. She said

I nodded

” he is having a concert today”. I said

“Oh! Just be careful “. She replied

I nodded and rushed out of the house, I need to go clean for Mrs Todd before Tina comes……..




I got to Mrs Todd house, she is a young mother who is very lazy. I do most of her house chores and she pays me weekly

” you are early today”. She said as soon as he saw me

“Good afternoon ma”. I greeted and began cleaning

I made sure the whole house was clean and went over to tell her I was done

“Ma, I am ready to take my leave”. I said

” oh, so fast”. She observed

Please help me wash those clothes, she said pointing to a basket

“Damn”. I cursed quietly, I was really pissed

I picked up the baskets of clothes, went outside and began washing..

I spread it outside when I was done and left without telling her before she gives me more work…..




I got home and Tina was already waiting

“Sofia”. She called as soon as she saw me. You kept me waiting

” I am sorry”. I apologised

I assessed her, she was wearing a short blue gown and a white sneakers. She looked stunning

” you look beautiful”. I commented

She nodded smiling


I went over to my bag and started looking for a good cloth. Tina came over to help me out but there was nothing good..

She signed.” You could have told me, I could have brought an extra gown”.she said

” what about that red gown”: Bella said pointing to one of my mum dress.

” wow it is beautiful”.Tina remarked

I picked up the gown , it was really beautiful. It is very special to my mum because it was a gift from my late dad…

” I will have to ask my mum if I can wear it”. I said



“Mum”. I called

She was outside weaving

” yes”. She replied

I went over to meet her. Her eyes widened immediately she saw the gown.

“Can I wear this “. I asked. I don’t have any good clothes to wear to the concert..

She nodded

” it is all yours now”. She said

Yippee! I exclaimed



I put on the clothes and Tina and Bella stared on. They looked speechless

” what”. I asked

” you are beautiful Sofia”. Tina complimented

“Thanks”. I said blushing

I put on my only black sandals, packed my hair in a loose bun and grabbed my bag..

” we are good to go”. I said

” can I go with you”. Bella suddenly asked

“No, you can’t”. I replied

” I want to go see Shayne”. She whined

” you will see him when you are older” Tina said as we both laughed


They are on their way to see that rude Shayne sings



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